I got mad when I was riding my bike. My front tire didn't want to move any more.

Flame Sentence Combining

The shelter burned and the flames rumbled like a freight train as they sucked at the air.
The flames rumbled because the shelter burned like a freight train as they sucked at the air.

Alaska

The U.S. bought Alaska from Russia in October 1867 for 7.2 million dollars, or two cents per acre. Alaska longest river, the Yukon, runs2,300 Miles, 1,400 in Alaska and 900 in Canada. There are more than 3,000 rivers in Alaska and over 3 million lakes. The largest, Lake Iliamna, encompasses over 1,000 square miles. Each year Alaska has approximately 5,000 earthquakes, including 1,000 that measure above 3.5 on the Richter scale. Of the ten strongest earthquakes ever recorded in the world, three have occurred in Alaska. On March 27, 1964, North America's strongest recorded earthquake, moment magnitude 9.2 rock Alaska has 6,640 miles of coastline and, including islands, has 33,904 miles of shoreline.ed central Alaska.

I Bought 3 BFC Energy Drink

The first time I bought a BFC Energy Drink can it took me about 3 hours to drink it. I dont see how my cousin can drink 2 of those in 10 minutes. When I finish 1 can, my heart was moving fast.I had a very hard time staying in one spot. My heart was moving very fast, and I started to get tired about 8 pm the next day.

So or Because

Anna went to the store because she needed milk.

Chris ate too much candy, so his stomace hurt.

Richard felt tired tired, so he bought an energy drink.

Telsa ran after the bus because she woke up late.

He farted because he ate too many beans.

My cousin farted because he was eating apples.

Im going to the store, so I can buy a Vault.

She's coming with me, so I can buy two 24 pack of soda.

Embarrassing Moments

I seen a gap of water that was at least 3-4 feet deep and 8 feet long. Me and my cousins Pete, Jesse, Julian, and Joel are walking the dogs. They had about 3 dogs name King, Tazz, Checko AKA Mcloven. We took turns walking each dog, and out of nowhere we pantsed each other. My cousin Pete got me in the middle of the state fairgrounds field. I got Jesse while doing the dishes. Julian and Joel we have never got. I told my cousin Pete I'll get you some time today. He asked me if i wanted to go to the Walmart with him. We started to look at the 360 games. There was about 50 people around us and 2 hot girls were walking our way and out of nowhere I got him. He got so embarrassed.

sentence combining

That girl is a whiz at math. she also gots a calculator in her hand. Anthony & Jake is a fine writer.Janet directed the band, she also plays the drums.Maria is a fast reader. She just finished reading WAR AND PEACE.

Correcting Sentences

The lettuce is all over the table.
The tornado was completely unexpected.
Try to get here on time.
Can I go with you?
I should study for the test.
I have no money.

sentence correcting

The dog followed Mary, and she forced herself to stay calm, while it followed her for a half a mile.

The dog followed Mary for a half a mile, while she forced herself to stay calm, but it stayed very close behind her.

The dog followed Mary, because it stayed very close behind her, she forced herself to stay calm.

Weird Way 2 Sleep

where you ever lock in or out

Me and my family came back from the park and my mom was looking for the keys to the house. My sister found the house keys and the car keys inside the car. I had to climb though the window and unlock the front door luckly my mom had a spare key to car inside the house.

An Interesting Thing That Happened Today

Well, today I was really stupid for riding my bike in front of a car. I was probably at least 20-30 feet away from the car and I cut in front of them. The driver said, "your crazy" and I said, "I know I'm crazy". I just found out that that my cousin Cynthia got hit by a car yesterday on a lowrider bike. She said she was flying and she was out cold for 3 1/2 hours. Her and her brother and her dad where coming back from the store.

Favorite Movie

I like to watch movie's more than watch tv. I like the movie Redline, American Gangster,Blades Of Glory,also Chase that stars Charlie Sheen and the tv show 2 and a half men, and also Glory Road.

3 Peer Editing

Step 1-Compliments
Being positive is to staying positive.
I really love your topic
I think you used a lot of good details
I like when you use the word
My favorite part was because...
This was really fun to read because...
I like the way you ____...
Step 2- suggestion
Be specific give details.
Step 3-Corrections
Spelling mistakes
Sentence mistakes
Punctuation mistakes

How Do You Get To Places

When you get to places do you go by bus, bike, skooter, taxi, or car. My house is about 6miles from here. It takes about 45-55 minutes.When ever I feel I'm going to have a good day I go walking or walking.

What Technology Do You Use

I use a Laptop and, Mp3 player, IPOD and also a Camcorder. What do u use?

What I Think About This Project

I'm not excited about this project. It was a pain getting set up.