sentence correcting

1.Lorraine moved to a new school.-correct
Lorraine moved to a new school.
2.scared at first.
People are scared at first.
3.it was hard to meet new people.
It is hard to meet new people.
4.lorraine new lab partner,janeese.
Lorraine new lab parter is janeese.
5.read an exciting book
Japese read an excitng book.
6.the name of the main character was tracy
The main character is tracy.
7.This teenage character.
There is a teenage character.
8.told lorraine about the book.
Some people told Lorraine about the book.